corey mcdermith

i will be adding more as soon as i can. please leave somments and or and reviews.

Thanks for the critiques guys. this was not really supposed to be anything. I was just bored and took this off the top of my head.

The emotion i felt when reading this story almost put me through the floor. wow. it was incredible. Keep up the awesome work and i hope to hear more from ...

If it was poetic then this would be good, it just lamenting prose that is unrefined being called a poem. This sounds almost disturbingly familiar to generic cries for help ...

thanks to you all for reading my story. i will fix teh problems once i hve teh time.

hey! that was reallly good. i liked it and hope to see more of it in teh days to come. awsome and keep up the good work.

i still think it is an all around awsome story. good job adn keep writing.

hey! that was pretty dang good! i am only new to this place, but i read a lot and i know a good story when i see one. awesome job ...

im really gald you thought so, but no one else liked it and i thought it was really good. (sigh)

sorry tha my poem was not sataasfactory. i really am only a begginer at poetry.

and when the day fades adn all goes to night, my love for you will shine with all of its might.

this really was a beautiful piece of work. i think whoever this is for is a very lucky person if you feel this strongly for them. keep up the great ...

Very good. i found it quite fascinating. I was pulled in almost immediatly adn look forward to the rest of the story.

this story was not to bad. a few things i would have changed, but nothing wrth mentioning, so ggod job and keep up the good work

WOW! this was one of the few stories that have ever made me cry. i like thee mixture of natural events with the feelings of the Supernatural. it was one ...